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Opulence MAG

May 1, 2008
By AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There&#039;s just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger<br /> <br /> Life it too short to let you matter.


I’ve been watching him for days now. When he leaves his house to go to school, I’m the one carefully tailing him, switching cars every day to make myself look less suspicious. If he ever sneaks out of his second-story room, I’ll be the one silently watching from a nearby tree. In class when he turns, feeling eyes on the back of his head, I’m the one who sent the hair on the back of his neck up on end. I am the girl whose shadow is always slightly overlapping his.

Being assigned to watch him almost makes me
feel like I’m not a stalker. Though I’m only 17, I’m a full-fledged member of the organization known as O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. I’ve been with them since the ­tender age of five. It’s my home. Being an orphan, my office is also my permanent residence, the couch a fold-out bed. There are many others like me: no family. A lot of us are loners and haven’t chosen this route for ourselves.

I’m a tracker. I have been for years and some might say that I am the best at not being the best. In other words, I’m great at being invisible. Or at not being noticed. It’s not as hard as the others in the organization think. Being young and female is good, since most we track are young. Seeing me around younger people – my age, actually – doesn’t raise alarm bells. It helps that I’m cute. With a small frame, light hazel eyes, and short blond hair that curls under my chin, I don’t appear threatening. Of course, my ­organization-funded training doesn’t back that theory.

Soon I won’t be tracking down others with the power. They are finally going to give me an apprentice. After years of mastering everything I’ve been taught, they see my potential. That’s not to say I know everything. Even with my extended life I won’t be able to learn all the things I want to. If only this annoying boy would show the signs. It’s been almost a week. If he doesn’t show soon, they’ll reassign me. That much longer until I get my apprentice.

So here I am, sipping a latté and waiting for the Target to leave for school. I have been put in all of his classes in case something happens there, though I graduated high school years ago. Private tutors sped things up. With no family or personal ties, I had lots of time to devote to my studies. Martial arts black belts. Twelve languages, not including English. Everything a girl needs for a serious career in the agency. Such positions of power are not handed out easily. You must prove yourself many times over.

The Target and I have never spoken, but I know a lot about him. His file told me some, but after watching him for only a few days, I feel confident in saying that I know things no one else does. Not just the obvious, either. He resents his father and is protective of his mother, which makes me suspect the father is less than faithful. He smiles often but doesn’t make a lot of eye contact. He usually only speaks when spoken to. Although he has many friends, he isn’t close with any of them. The Target is observant, a watcher. This leads me to believe we would get along if he shows any promise.

I look down at my watch, then back at his house a few blocks away. The Target is late, which means I’ll be late too. Today my ride is a shiny black sports car, not out of place in this suburb full of midlife-crisis men. I turn on the engine impatiently. I’m fiddling with the radio when I hear something. I don’t feel any immediate danger, and I know to trust those feelings. But I ­also know that something is off.

Just as I am about to get out of the car and pretend to look in the trunk, the passenger door opens. I look up in surprise as the Target slides into the seat next to me. I grin, quite pleased by this turn of events. This is definitely a good sign. Perhaps intuition is strong in him. That would be good for my apprentice to have, complementary. I could handle having to deal with that.

“Hello, Lenna. Why have you been following me for a week now?” the Target asks lightly, conversationally, his first words ever said in my direction.

Ah, one of my many aliases. The organization set it up so that whenever I’m on a case, I get a new name, past, and present. It’s very powerful. The organization can basically do anything it needs; it has people everywhere imaginable. I’m just one of many, though there aren’t that many at the top, as I am. They don’t trust many to be trackers. Or to be apprentices. All of the full members have the power, though we control others to get things done.

My smile deepens as I say in my authoritative, professional voice, “My real name is Jade. I am a witch of the moon and a tracker for the organization known as O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. You are also a witch. We would like to formally welcome you into the organization as my apprentice. Here is my card for verification.”

Jade Wordsworth
Tracker for O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E
Official Political Understanding Lending ­Everyone ­Navigation for Co-Existing Ethereals
Office hours: 8 a.m.-3 p.m. Mon-Sat
Phone: 555-5555
Proud league of witches of the sun and moon.
Worldwide.

“What do you mean ‘moon and sun’? Or ‘tracker’?” he asks, still looking at my card like it’s going to ­disappear.

“Types of magic. Moon is all about spells, the sun is more potion-based, though each type of witchcraft involves the other somehow. As a tracker, I find people like you and I bring them to O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. Every witch must register, train, and become a member by law. In fact, the organization is like a government targeted toward witches,” I explain with a smile, loving the fact that this time I get to teach the newbie.

“Magic? Seriously?” he asks, eyes wide, meeting mine. They are large, yellow, and catlike.

I click a button on my left, automatically locking the doors. I put the car into drive, pulling out onto the road. As an afterthought I add as a courtesy, “I think you had better come with me.” .



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loopybanana said...
on Apr. 19 2011 at 9:51 am
loopybanana, Coventry, New York
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Favorite Quote:
one is not good if they are not themselves...

agreeeeeeeed! d.___.b

Madgie BRONZE said...
on Apr. 15 2011 at 11:09 pm
Madgie BRONZE, Antioch, California
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This is a work of fiction. Saying it's occult-ish because it has witches in it is a bit ridiculous. I don't think she meant witches in the occult sense, either, In fact, I'm positive.

What I didn't like was the revelation that she was a witch and is magic was rather sudden. There's nothing in the story that makes it obvious she works for something other than a normal agency like the CIA. Having it suddenly be a magical agency seemed rather randomly thrown in to me.


on Apr. 11 2011 at 6:25 pm
choirchick2013 BRONZE, Pierceton, Indiana
3 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not let anyone look down on you because you are young, but set an example for other in faith, in love, and in purity. (1 Timothy 4:12)

I completly agree with Ebony Black.... this was a good read! :) if you finish it as you started it, it is sure to be a good book! :D

Ebony Black said...
on Apr. 11 2011 at 8:43 am
This was different. The style of writing you used gave detail, but not to much, that way the reader kept reading. I enjoyed it and I could also picture it as a novel. It has potential.

on Apr. 3 2011 at 7:22 pm
foxwriter BRONZE, O&#39Fallon, Illinois
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
If life&#039;s not fair then make it fair.

I'm pretty sure that's the point--it's thinking outside of the box and looking at things from different points of view. I really love this story and when I read it I thought I was reading a book. Well done.

on Mar. 20 2011 at 8:32 pm
kkayla3897 BRONZE, Ogden, Utah
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OOH!!! Calling them Mages would be good. And it works really well for both male and female.

on Mar. 20 2011 at 8:30 pm
kkayla3897 BRONZE, Ogden, Utah
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It's a very good short story, but I think it'd be good as a novel. I don't really like calling them witches, so maybe something more subtle would be an improvement. I'd like you to go further in detail with the target though. I can picture this as a pretty good book.

PoetryGirl said...
on Mar. 20 2011 at 4:27 pm
The style is nice, and I was kept guessing until the end.  It was a little confusing though, and I don't like that she's a witch, making other people become witches.  That's occult, something you don't want to approve, and it's rather creepy and a bit shocking.

on Mar. 20 2011 at 3:54 pm
PerfectMGymnast DIAMOND, Parker, Colorado
57 articles 25 photos 633 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you don&#039;t leap you&#039;lll never know what it&#039;s like to fly&quot;

Amazing!!!! :)) I love how descriptive you are and you have a great story idea so far!!!!

on Mar. 20 2011 at 3:40 pm
Ilovelife BRONZE, Scarborough, Maine
3 articles 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
An eye for and eye makes the whole world blind :)

OMG! That was soooo cool! It was so suspenseful and spy like! I loved that ! You should sooo make a sequel!

on Mar. 19 2011 at 6:28 pm
live2dance SILVER, Rolling Meadows, Illinois
7 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
stand in your own place and know you are there.

i luv it! u NEED  to make a novel o gosh u r a potential writer! gosh ur very good

on Mar. 16 2011 at 2:59 am
sunshine04 BRONZE, Vindhyanagar, Other
1 article 3 photos 253 comments
its really cool if you make a novel out of it i would be your like the greatest fan

zedzz said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 11:08 am
zedzz, Dubai, Other
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this definitely caught my interest..!! it's a cool story.. what would be cooler is if you turn this into a book..!! or a series..!!

on Mar. 8 2011 at 3:21 pm
DifferentTeen PLATINUM, Seaford, Delaware
32 articles 2 photos 329 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;There&rsquo;s no such thing as true love, just spurts of insanity&mdash;falling over and over again, thinking that won&rsquo;t happen to me&quot;

I agree completely with this comment! I would most defintely buy and read this as a book! Excellence in words! Please, don't ever stop writing.

on Feb. 27 2011 at 6:29 pm
Cool. :) I especially like this because Jade is my name too :D

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Feb. 27 2011 at 5:08 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

I love the picture that you chose! 

Seriously, turn this story into a book. I bet it would be a NYT best-selling novel. 


on Feb. 27 2011 at 11:51 am
Parantan BRONZE, Mars, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Giving up doesn&#039;t always mean you are weak; sometimes it means that you are strong enough to let go.

Hi Blissless. I'm obviously not the author but I just thought I'd point this out. He knows her alias because as she said in the story, she was placed in all his classes. Jist thought I'd point it out.

AquaGem- I love the story! Any chance your going to turn it into a novel?


Blissless said...
on Feb. 26 2011 at 1:01 pm
Blissless, Milton, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Kidnapping&quot; is a strong word. I prefer &quot;Surprise Adoption.&quot;

This is really good (: Although the whole "we've been watching you" thing is a bit cliche. And how did he know her alias? :( If you ever make a full novel of this though, I'd love to read it (:

MKimmi said...
on Feb. 26 2011 at 11:38 am
MKimmi, NY, New York
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I AGREE!!!!!

Chans247 GOLD said...
on Feb. 26 2011 at 2:29 am
Chans247 GOLD, Rosthern, Other
12 articles 6 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You could say this advice is priceless. Now...if you trust in yourself...believe in your dreams...and follow your star...you&#039;ll still get beaten by people who spend their time working hard and learning things and weren&#039;t so lazy.&quot; ~Discworld

It was a great story, but I think if you were to re-write it to give it more plot and explanation and then make in into a novel, it would be a lot better. But it was really good:)