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The Antichrist

May 21, 2009
By Anonymous

They’ve all plotted against me for nine months; it’d seem their plans are coming to fruition. Last December 25th I dreamt I was raped by a demon; now it is September 25th, and that demon’s spawn is being born. The people around me do nothing to ease the worst pain I’ve ever felt. As that pain is released I see the eyes of the new-born. They’re an animal’s.

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Read not if your heart's faint.

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on Apr. 19 2012 at 1:18 pm
tdpackerfan BRONZE, Scottsdale, Arizona
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This was not even a story. There was no plot development or character development. This was instead a cliche-ridden waste of time about yet another demon-baby being born. We have heard this a million times. This was nothing.

on Mar. 28 2012 at 5:07 pm
Zaraclaylime DIAMOND, Chicago, Illinois
75 articles 2 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
So I suppose my simple advice is: Love your life. I only say that because your life is what you have to give.<br /> -Tom Hiddleston

this isnt really historical, but i love it! really cool!

on Jul. 30 2011 at 1:02 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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I LOVED THE STORY!!! Great job and keep on writing!!! one of my stories was just posted. if anyone could read it that would be great. Its called: Alien Invasion Series: Book One: The Caller. just click my user name and then that story and start reading, I enjoy the comments and feedback! :)(:

on Jul. 18 2011 at 12:59 pm
Hippiealien SILVER, Fair Oaks, California
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Favorite Quote:
A Idea and a number 2 pencil can take you anywhere.

i don't get it.. It's hardly a story,and has no plot.. Good description but i don't get it.. O.O

on Jul. 8 2011 at 2:35 pm
ashleyX13 PLATINUM, Memphis, Tennessee
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&quot;I&#039;ve made mistakes; not one regret.&quot; Alyssa Nicolson

interesting, im not really sure what time in history this is about or what this is about but it has a cool feeling to it, i got chills while reading!!

on Nov. 22 2010 at 10:49 am
Thanks, I have another short story on here called Biting the Bullet

on Oct. 17 2010 at 4:55 pm
dancergirl3 BRONZE, Brighton, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
If you enjoy dancing, show it. If you like danicing, belive it. If you love dancing, live it.<br /> -Anonymous

I feel that you have GREAT description but, i don't get the idea of the story! But i would love to read more of your pieces very interesting! :)

Shelly-T GOLD said...
on Aug. 12 2010 at 10:59 am
Shelly-T GOLD, Romeoville, Illinois
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This is very intriguing, but I don't really get it. 

Nice work, keep it up.


Zak De Stael said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 3:09 am
Zak De Stael, Hartland, Wisconsin
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It was a school project. I had just gotten out of church and was just writing stuff down.

And to everyone who wants to know how it ends, come up with your own ending. I'm too lazy to.


Zak De Stael said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 3:07 am
Zak De Stael, Hartland, Wisconsin
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I was lazy and just clicked at random

TheJust ELITE said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 7:49 pm
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they&rsquo;re told.&quot;-Skandar Keynes<br /> <br /> &quot;When it&rsquo;

Uh, this isn't really historical. It's like present or future.

on Jun. 7 2010 at 1:34 pm
Read Revelations in the Bible if you want to know the whole story.

nixchix SILVER said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 11:23 am
nixchix SILVER, Dumfries, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If things are going untowardly one month, they are sure to mend the next.&quot; - Jane Austen

Continue it. I want to know about her and what happens.

songbird GOLD said...
on Jan. 4 2010 at 4:25 pm
songbird GOLD, Norwich, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;He who chooses me must hazard all he hath&quot;-William Shakespeare, Merchant of Venice

really different, but in a good way. could be longer and have more elaboration on the story.

SuzyQ said...
on Oct. 6 2009 at 6:57 pm
not strange really, more like weird , but it is intresting . And it's very imaginative !

on Sep. 20 2009 at 6:43 pm
KiraKira PLATINUM, Cardiff By The Sea, California
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Favorite Quote:
Do not pity the dead, Harry. Pity the living, and above all, pity those who live without love -Albus Dumbledore

Strange in an eerily intriguing way. Short and sweet. :)