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The Tree Outside

November 10, 2023
By Anonymous

“Go ahead, and begin your quick write,” said Mr. Greene, and I was ushered into a world of words.

“No matter what you do, be writing for the entirety of the twelve minutes,” he added.


Beside me, you sit in silent solitude. I glimpse a hint of loneliness in your eyes, and I wonder for how long you have been sitting here. Your roots stretch around you, creating a winding circle, like a coiled dragon. As I intently observe you, a symphony of sounds surround us - the rhythmic ‘hoot-hoot’ of birds, the woodpeckers' relentless drumming, and the whimsical rustling of leaves. 


I now realize that you are home to many living things, who understand your value, unlike the students and teachers that pass by you every day. I can only fathom to be silently neglected and rarely appreciated by others when possessing such beauty. 

Yet I can see a hint of positivity in your eyes. At the very top of your trunk, the leaves have begun to turn into a red-orange color. This is an indication of the beginning of fall. It will only be a matter of weeks before you shed your foliage, only to embark on a fresh cycle of growth.


“Twelve minutes are up, class. If you’ve been observing, thinking, and writing for the entirety of this time, give yourselves a pat on the back.”

 

As everybody stood back up to go inside the classroom, I stayed back for a moment longer, wanting to finish my quick write. What had previously seemed as though it was a waste of time, now came back to impact me, and teach me a new lesson: the importance of observation, thought, and writing. 


Thanks, Mr. Greene.


The author's comments:

Recently, Mr. Greene took us to appreciate the tree outside. Hundreds of students and teachers pass by the tree every day, yet only a few stop to admire its beauty. My language arts teacher instructed us to write a “quick” write, for twelve minutes, which of course, did not sound “quick.”

When writing this set piece, I used imagery, bringing the tree and its surroundings to life. The “coiled dragon” of roots, the red-orange color of the leaves, and the “symphony of sounds” paint vivid pictures in the reader’s mind. The “coiled dragon” is a metaphor that compares the tree’s roots to a mythical creature, which shows their impressive and ancient nature. In addition, the motif of observation, thought, and writing is threaded throughout the set piece.


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