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July 18, 2009
By FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
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FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
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I don&#039;t have ambitions or desires. <br /> Being a poet isn&#039;t my ambition, <br /> it&#039;s my way of being alone.<br /> ~ Fernando Pessoa ~

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One person i know has two golden eyes, another person I know has two gray eyes. The person that has the two gold eyes sees perfection, superiority. The one that has the gray eyes sees much, much more than that.

© Paulina A., Marblehead, MA

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I was reading a book by Gail Carson Levine called Writing Magic. One of the exercises in the book included re-writing something the author had written. i re-wrote a small 'quote' from the book and molded it to be my own words. I hope you like it!!!!
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biggerinfinities SILVER said...
on Jul. 29 2009 at 12:26 am
biggerinfinities SILVER, Superior, Colorado
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&ldquo;We accept the love we think we deserve.&rdquo; <br /> ― Stephen Chbosky, The Perks of Being a Wallflower

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so deep and amazing, that im not sure there are words to describe its beauty