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September 26, 2009
By EternalMadness GOLD, Fresno, California
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EternalMadness GOLD, Fresno, California
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They say it&#039;s what you make<br /> I say it&#039;s up to fate<br /> It&#039;s woven in my soul<br /> I need to let you go<br /> Your eyes, they shine so bright<br /> I want to save their light<br /> I can&#039;t escape this now<br /> Unless you show me how<br /> When you feel my heat<br /> Look into my eyes<br /> It&rsquo;s where my demons hide

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I really wish I could forget the way you said I LOVE YOU. The way you looked so cute and how you held my hand too tight but never noticed. I really wish I could forget your hot breath obn my neck and how it felt when you kissed me. I really wish I could stop missing how subtle and simple you were too please. How you asked me what were three things i Loved about you and once i replied you got upset and said
"I would say three things I love about you, but I can't pick just three". I smiled so big and wrapped my arms around you.
I really wish none of this ever happened... The call that night broke my heart. I wake up everyday now, hoping to hear my phone ring and your voice on the other end. The call that night ruined my life. The call that night told me you were gone forever and i'd never kiss your beautiful face again. So now as im typing this and tears are rolling down my cheeks I can hear your voice in the background saying that you love me. Maybe I should'nt have taken all of those pills... But I could see your face in the back of my mind! so close I could almost touch it. Im fading quick now so Im gonna go meet you in the light. I love you sweet angel, sweet angel that left too fast.

© Yisrawayl G., Philadelphia, PA

The author's comments:
Sometimes we get pushed to far, to the point of having an unbearable weight on our shoulders that is weighing us down.
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mickeymouse said...
on Nov. 7 2011 at 9:03 am
wow lots of emotions. nice writing style. keep it up:)
NKsunshine BRONZE said...
on Aug. 6 2011 at 10:24 am
NKsunshine BRONZE, Palatine, Illinois
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&quot;I don&#039;t need easy, I just need possible!&quot; ~Bethany Hamilton

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Great writing style!! This plot has potential to go amazing places, kep writing:)
Haley_Elizabeth GOLD said...
on Mar. 27 2011 at 5:40 pm
Haley_Elizabeth GOLD, Wallingford, Vermont
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Oh my gosh! Amazing! Your a wonderful writer, but I absolutely hate sad endings like this:(
hrf1434 GOLD said...
on Oct. 29 2010 at 6:52 pm
hrf1434 GOLD, Collierville, Tennessee
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Great writing it is awsome
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE said...
on Sep. 15 2010 at 11:20 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
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I luv it and ur writing style.

U should be a romance writer.

paranomial PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 17 2010 at 7:57 am
paranomial PLATINUM, Hyderabad, Other
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too good...it is an amazing story loved reading it..got loads of emotions 
weebnini DIAMOND said...
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oh my gosh. LUV IT!! thanks for making me cry!! XD it was amazing. 
purplegiirl24 BRONZE said...
on May. 9 2010 at 3:59 pm
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w o w . " I really wish I could forget. . . how it felt when you kissed me." Amazing piece
xoxoLissieM SILVER said...
on Mar. 20 2010 at 3:46 am
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dis got me crying....great story
xDarkxPixiex GOLD said...
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This sort of reminds of the book "Kissed by an angel" where the bf dies in a car accident but comes back as an angel to save the girl from being murdered! Your writing is really good! keep it up!
emily23 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 4 2009 at 2:56 pm
emily23 BRONZE, Solon, Maine
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wow that's gotta suck for her i mean i wouldn't know how it feels to have my bf die but i know how u want to call them and tell them everything but like with me they don't want to hear it they want someone else
SunshineGirl#15 said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 7:05 pm
I heard once of a girl who lost her boyfriend in a car accident.

They were really close. She said the thing that hurts the most is wanting to tell him everything about her day,but remembering half way through dailing his number that he's not there...

Wonderful story.
windblossom said...
on Oct. 26 2009 at 11:27 am
windblossom, Hyderabad, Other
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Wow! This is well written! You're a very good writer! keep going!! cant wait to read more from you! :)
live.love. BRONZE said...
on Oct. 20 2009 at 5:17 pm
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wow that was sad...but oh so good! i would deffinatly read more of your work!
EHunt96 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 11 2009 at 1:52 pm
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Wow!

Great detail!!!! You are a great writer!!!

Keep going!!!!