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If I said I love you...
September 17, 2009
If I told you I loved you?
Would you say it too?
Or would I be alone.
Trapped in a Taylor Swift tone Would there be a love story,
or is there no such glory.
Will there be a force,
or no white horse?
If I said I love you,
Would we be through????
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This article has 34 comments.
Sileron-evol PLATINUM said...
on May. 29 2010 at 11:06 am
lol this is cuuuutteee
thats.about.it. BRONZE said...
on Apr. 16 2010 at 8:59 am
aww, this is cute!
Basketball4everr GOLD said...
on Apr. 4 2010 at 7:50 pm
i like the poem a lot- c if you could add more too it; it would make the poem stronger
JohnnyDeppLover123 DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 8 2010 at 6:29 pm
Ha ha ha that was funny and great!!! Nice job...awesome job!!! (with a hint of humor!)
lol this is ironic! I decided to look at your artical because I wanted to hear something bueatifull and yet reflected how I feel at this moment, And thats exactailly what I got after reading your astonishing peice! Keep up the good work and Thank you! XDD
choirchic101 SILVER said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 9:02 pm
this was really good. i like how you tied Taylor Swift in it. we all wonder if the relationship will end when we tell that person i love you. this should be in the poetry section.
heimana said...
on Oct. 27 2009 at 4:29 pm
I think the poem is good. You might want to take the advice of adorabiblegirl and move this piece into poetry. I liked how you tied the poem into the Taylor Swift song like in the line " Trapped in a Taylor Swift tone." I found that funny because all of her songs are about break ups or make ups, and that was the whole purpose of this poem. I also liked how you were able to have some of Taylor Swift's song titles rhyme with other lines. Like in the line, "Will there be a force or no White Horse" Over-all the only thing you really need to change is moving this piece into the poem section. Great job though!
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