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We: The Last

September 30, 2012
By ShadowWraith BRONZE, Eagle Mountain, Utah
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ShadowWraith BRONZE, Eagle Mountain, Utah
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When life gives you lemons, make orange juice and sit back and let the world wonder how the heck you did it.

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It was depressing, looking out upon the wasteland before me. I had read books and seen movies depicting the future. Flying cars, time machines, tridimensional-whatchamacallits. But that was a fantasy. This was reality. An eternally burning, radioactive minefield of rock, hot, twisted metal, and more rock. Not a true living thing for thousands of miles. The humans had destroyed themselves. I sat at the remains of a once tall building. I was on the edge of a maze of broken skyscrapers, lifted concrete, crashed planes, bombshells, and bones. That was where We lived. That is, if you could call it living. We were only half alive. We were simply, We. that is what we called ourselves.

© Rebecca B., Santa Clara, CA

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I wrote this based off of a conversation I had ith a friend of mine. We were talking about how, essentially, humans were destroying themselves. That's what inspired me to write this story. It isn't done yet, but if I get good feedback, I will write the rest.
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Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Apr. 13 2013 at 9:13 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
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&quot;If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them.&quot;<br /> Henry David Thoreau<br /> <br /> &quot;I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once.&quot;<br /> John Green

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Please, please, PLEASE keep writing! I love thid idea- I cant wait to hear more!!
Cat-Girl PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 29 2012 at 10:16 pm
Cat-Girl PLATINUM, Nyania, Planet Nyan, Oklahoma
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&quot;That&#039;s what&#039;s wrong with the people in this world; they believe they can do well by just getting by when they need to aim for the highest.&quot;<br /> -Keith Anderson<br /> &quot;You can never hope to build a better world without improving the individuals.&quot;<br /> -Marie Curie

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Thank you so much! You have no idea how much that made my day better. I've been making up stories since I was four... You are an amazing author, also! Your fictional story had excellent description with a twist of reality, and I really do hope that you build up on it. :)
Atl.Braves03 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 29 2012 at 12:32 am
Atl.Braves03 BRONZE, Tampa, FL, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
God is God and I am not<br /> I can only see a part<br /> Of this picture he&#039;s painting<br /> God is God and I am man<br /> I will never understand<br /> Because only God is God

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You have a flow to your writing that so many people just can't achieve. It's a talent and I hope you keep developing it.
Cat-Girl PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 20 2012 at 12:59 pm
Cat-Girl PLATINUM, Nyania, Planet Nyan, Oklahoma
20 articles 7 photos 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;That&#039;s what&#039;s wrong with the people in this world; they believe they can do well by just getting by when they need to aim for the highest.&quot;<br /> -Keith Anderson<br /> &quot;You can never hope to build a better world without improving the individuals.&quot;<br /> -Marie Curie

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Please keep on writing! This ends in a cliffhanger; it's begging to be turned into a complete story. It has an suspenseful plotline; you just need some characters. :D
ShadowWraith BRONZE said...
on Oct. 16 2012 at 8:02 pm
ShadowWraith BRONZE, Eagle Mountain, Utah
2 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, make orange juice and sit back and let the world wonder how the heck you did it.

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Thank you! I guess I'll start writing, then :)
Stella_Val_Illicia GOLD said...
on Oct. 9 2012 at 7:55 am
Stella_Val_Illicia GOLD, Salt Lake City, Utah
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&quot;In the beginning, the universe was created. This has made a lot of people angry and been widely regarded as a bad idea.&quot;<br /> --Douglas Adams

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Love this! It's very realistic :)