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Butchered Words

July 9, 2013
By Kali44 BRONZE, Redmond, Oregon
Kali44 BRONZE, Redmond, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living.&rdquo; <br /> ― Dr. Seuss


Chopped
Minced
Cut
She winced.
Painful words hit like a flame,
No one knew what she became.
Flame was her last resort,
By the flame she did distort.
Knife
Sliced
Bled
He cringed.
His heart was thoughtlessly singed.
They didn't know what they said,
But their crude words left him dead.
Doesn't matter how they regret,
To him, his death date was set.
Chopped
Minced
Cut
Winced
Knife
Sliced
Bled
Cringed
Dead.

Butchered words were said.


The author's comments:
Don't take the words you say to other people lightly. Say them to yourself, first.

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C.Duncan GOLD said...
on Jul. 19 2013 at 11:18 am
C.Duncan GOLD, Robbinsvill, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;When the world tells you NO, you just gotta look it straight in the face and tell it YES&quot;<br /> -Lil Wayne

wow! that was intense. I loved all of the words. they all fit perfectly to paint the picture of the story.