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"My Point of View"

November 26, 2013
By S.Sweater101 BRONZE, Oak Bluffs, Massachusetts
S.Sweater101 BRONZE, Oak Bluffs, Massachusetts
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When I read the story “My Point of View” the beginning caught my attention because of the descriptive words the author used to describe the different smells, people, and sights he saw that day. The story has a lot of words that describes the author’s point of view of the day he is having on the subway. I like the way he talked about the man who lost his wife and the sad face on the little girl. He talked about everybody that day with lots of detail. Overall this story was very descriptive with plenty of detail about just a normal day on the subway.



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