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Death Waits for No One

November 4, 2016
By a.k.a_thea BRONZE, Valley Stream, New York
a.k.a_thea BRONZE, Valley Stream, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"We may not be able to choose the setting or plot, but we can choose what kind of character we want to be."
-Kids of Appetite


My mind has been blown by this short story. The title, “Death Waits for No One,” is absolutely perfect for the plot of the story. At first, I didn’t think I would actually like the story at all until the sentence, “You had found no pulse,” peaked my interest. It definitely caused an audible gasp to come out and I suddenly had the need to be completely immersed in the plot. 

 

Michelle S. created a short story with the perfect amount of suspense, no plot holes, and a lot of great descriptions. The use of second person point of view in the story was executed in a great way. I’m usually not interested in stories that have second person point of view, but I was definitely interested in this one. Overall, “Death Waits for No One,” actually made me interested in reading something during one of my month long reading slump.



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Carmen said...
on Nov. 7 2016 at 1:00 pm
This is a really good

Llama said...
on Nov. 7 2016 at 7:44 am
This is really good!!

Llama said...
on Nov. 7 2016 at 7:43 am