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El Dominicano MAG

December 1, 2010
By jillian021993 BRONZE, Washington, District Of Columbia
jillian021993 BRONZE, Washington, District Of Columbia
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You smell like an ocean of hopes
and dreams,
Esperanzas y sueños.
You smell of Santiago,
Each and every tobacco finca.
Each and every Macanudo.
Each and every Romeo y Julieta.
Each and every Havana Honey.
Embrace the cohibi of our Taino ancestors.
Dulce guare. Kachi, karaya, ke'.
You bring out the Dominican in me.
The wide-hipped, wide-eyed morena.
The mango-skin lips.
The sweet bitterness of passion fruit
and pride.
You smell like Salomé Ureña
And Pedro Henriquez
And Fabio Fiallo
And Julia Àlvarez
And Junot Diaz
And each and every poet and storyteller of
our shared origins.
Quisqueyanos valientes!
Write me a poem.
Write me a song.
Tell me a story even if it's a lie.
Dime ya, dime ya, dime ya.
You bring out the Dominican bolero in me.
Read this poem.
I profess my love.
I profess my love.
I profess my love.
You bring out the Dominican in me.
You bring out the lover in me.
You bring out the poet in me.
I profess my love.
I profess my love.
I profess my love.
You bring it out of me.


The author's comments:
This poem is apart of a series of three poems that I had written for school about a month ago. I decided to make my series topic on my ex-boyfriends since I had never written a poem for any of them. "El Dominicano" is the second poem of the series and I enjoy reciting this poem the most.

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on Oct. 5 2011 at 7:51 pm
jillian021993 BRONZE, Washington, District Of Columbia
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Thank you. I really appreciate it.

EsseBayson said...
on Oct. 5 2011 at 1:13 pm
¡Trabajo bueno! I like the tone of this poem. It's very vivid and romantic. Keep writing...