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Shoot to Kill
Summary:
Jason is a 15-years old assassin, working for the mysterious Organization. When Jason leave one of his target alive, it came taunting him. Jason and two other army are fighting to get their hand on Hypertracker. Jason put his training to work and swiftly kills two birds with one stone.
Mike D.
Shoot to Kill
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This book has 8 comments.
Okay, I have a bit of criticism.
1. More description. I really want to know more about what's going on and need to learn it from a source other than the dialogue.
2. You should work on your grammar, particularly the plural/singular usage.
3. Try reading your dialogue aloud; it sounds kind of stiff. Try making it sound a bit more realistic.
I think you've got good potential here, but if you fix up those things, your story would be even better!
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“Well if you were perfect then you would be like a god, unattainable. I like to think that you are almost perfect, that one lucky girl can be the one to ‘attain’ you. I mean if you were perfect, or god like, there would be no way any girl would have a chance with you.”