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Lost In Wonderland
February 15, 2013
Summary:
Ava Danning, having only 3 bridges to the world...when one of her bridges breaks down. How will she cope with it?
Tinath Z.
Lost In Wonderland
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This book has 6 comments.
Keep writing is my one single advice. Keep perfecting the story. It's good as it is. Nonetheless, with novels, one must always seek perfection; that is, the bit of perfection any human can achieve, if possible. Great story. Keep developing these characters; they're enjoyable to read about and decipher their true natures.
Hey Calliashi! Thanks for reading my work! Yes, even though Ava's father is pushy, abusive and selfish, and I have hinted that, she (though she won't confess it ot front) has a small part which cares for him becuase he's her father after all. Thanks and I'll be reading your work, but my laptop broke :(
This is a pretty good story. I like how you're vague about what's happened in the first chapter. However I'm very curious about the father. Ava talks about him like some horrible awful person and Keas describes him as ruthless and pushing people too much. It almost makes him sound violent or abusive. I don't know if that's your intention but thats what it sounds like.
HammadWaseem said...
on May. 20 2013 at 8:28 am
very good!
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Favorite Quote:
I sleep to much, parents complain. I sleep less, parents complain. I go out too much, parents complain. I don't go out too much, parents complain. I play games too much, parents complain. I play games less, parents complain. I CANT WIN!