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Black Hearts
Summary:
Winter and Fayte, bestfriends since forever attent a boarding school, Moonlight Academy, as boarding school can get exceedingly boring they decide to make a band with Winters lont-time boyfriend Luther, though Luther brings a surprise with him to auditions
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why thankyou :)
and yes i have always been rather horrible with grammar, haha
i shall remember what you have said when i post the next chapter, and i shall check out your story :)
thanks - Sep
I like the story so far. Boarding schools are always cool to read about :) I'm looking forward to reading more.
Please don't take any of this personally, just trying to help: You should always capitalize the beginning of a sentence and put a period at the end. There are a lot of run-on sentences in the first chapter that could be broken into separate sentences. You should also put a comma before an ending quotation mark if following the quote is "he said" or "she said" or "he shouted" etc. Otherwise, use a period before the ending quote.
I'm looking forward to when they form a band. :) I actually have a novel up in the realistic fiction novel section about a band as well, it's called The Formation if you want to check it out.
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Favorite Quote:
"It is better to keep your mouth shut and let people wonder, than telling them yourself."<br /> -Myself
The story is good, like the plot and all, I really liked the idea - but the grammar and spelling mistakes kinda distracted from the story.
You have talent - but you need Spellcheck!