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Lavender Ice
Summary:
Aya, an ice planet. Where only hair of the deepest shades of lavender hair are royalty. Where things of earth's past are their present. Where rules are strict, and being a princess is not so easy.
Born into the royal family, Aiyana, the seventh princess of Aya is faced with many challenges a fifteen year old girl should not have to face. Challenges of being forced into marraige by her father. The challenge that many laws are out dated and should not exsist. And of course who can forget that she is the seventh Princess which was to bring end to the Ayan race as told by an ancient Prophet? Of course, Aiyana, being second born, has no power over her future nor the future of her planet. What is a girl to do?
Alexia Renee K.
Lavender Ice
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This book has 4 comments.
Okay, this is a good start to your novel, but I have some criticisms:
1. This is kind of cliched. A princess must unwillingly wed a man much older than her. I've definitely heard that before.
2. Work on your dialogue. Even for royals, it's a bit stiff.
3. You could add a bit more description; the world your story is set in sounds interesting. I'd like to read more about it!
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"It's a good thing to be strange. Normalness leads to sadness." -Philip Lester
I really love your story ! Please write more soon, I want to know what Berkley's angle is ! And I agree with Immortal1290 and CarrieAnn13, your dialogues need some work but other why's the plot it great.
Could you please check out my book, The Forgotten ? Thanks :)