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The Night of October the Tenth.

January 11, 2019
By apeeke BRONZE, Hammonton, New Jersey
apeeke BRONZE, Hammonton, New Jersey
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Summary:

Credence Warrren, or addressed as Mr.Warren, becomes possessed of a agressive, heinous spirit, or devil. He murders his wife with a bloody knife, and tries to kill his son named Danny. Danny then runs within the cellar, as supernatural occurences seem to happen. Rats scutter their way from a hole amongst the wall, and piles above Danny heads. Once Credence goes back upstairs, Danny gapes to see the rats begin to eat each other. He grabs a strip of wood and walks upstiars. He finds the hallway weeped in red, ozzing blood. Horrible, terrible, blood! Credence leaped from a bedroom and tries to stab Danny, but Danny hits him over the head with the bat. Mr.Warren then dies along the floor, as Danny goes into his parents room to dial the numbers of 911. 


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The Night of October the Tenth.


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on Mar. 23 2023 at 12:42 pm
Happy-Ending-101 BRONZE, Fairfax, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
You only get as much out of it, as you put into it

i love the detail. this is amazing

on Mar. 23 2023 at 12:42 pm
Happy-Ending-101 BRONZE, Fairfax, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
You only get as much out of it, as you put into it

i love the detail. this is amazing

on Mar. 1 2022 at 5:18 pm
915359MiguelF, El Paso, Texas
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I like how the author includes dialogue between the characters, leading the reader on throughout the whole story. One improvement, however, could be to add more detail on how the whole story came about, and how it all led to that situation. Also adding extra detail to the little things could make this story more thriller.

apeeke BRONZE said...
on Apr. 26 2019 at 9:05 pm
apeeke BRONZE, Hammonton, New Jersey
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-NOT ALL THOSE WHO WANDER ARE LOST.
-WHEN YOUR PAST CALLS, DON'T ANSWER. IT HAS NOTHING NEW TO SAY.
-THERE ARE TWO GREAT DAYS IN A PERSONS LIFE- THE DAY WE WERE BORN AND THE DAY WE DISCOVER WHY

apeeke BRONZE said...
on Jan. 24 2019 at 8:59 pm
apeeke BRONZE, Hammonton, New Jersey
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thanks

cojo said...
on Jan. 20 2019 at 9:10 am
cojo, Buna, New Jersey
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Really good! And really scary! This is a must read

apeeke BRONZE said...
on Jan. 19 2019 at 4:28 pm
apeeke BRONZE, Hammonton, New Jersey
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So good! And so scary!