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Breath

September 25, 2013
By Dragonflylover19 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
Dragonflylover19 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"You must do one thing that scares you everyday"


I am sitting here in the lab just looking at all these people. there are old people, young people in the middle people. Why don't we ever just take a breath and breath. everyone is always on the go. nobody has time for this or that. There are so many people around that you probably see more than once. Its like you see them but you aren't really looking. Do you just stop and think "whats their story?" Do you ever wonder why someone is smiling or why someone is crying? I want to stop just walking and running around life. I want to experience other peoples pain and happiness. everyone deserves to know that they aren't the only ones going through s***, or that other people are just as happy as them for no reason. so as I'm sitting here just looking around i give a smile to an old lady and she came over and gave me a nite saying that there need to be more people who smile at strangers. so challenge yourself to say hello to stranger. Maybe you made their day and you don't even know it yet.



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on Oct. 2 2013 at 10:46 am
Dragonflylover19 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"You must do one thing that scares you everyday"

Thank you! I appreciate it!

on Oct. 2 2013 at 10:44 am
Dragonflylover19 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"You must do one thing that scares you everyday"

I appreciate your critisism! Thank you

on Oct. 1 2013 at 4:13 pm
AnInkling SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
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&ldquo;This is your life. Is it everything you dreamed that it would be, when the world was younger and you had everything to lose?&rdquo; Switchfoot<br /> &ldquo;Have I now become your enemy by telling you the truth?&rdquo; Galatians 4:16

I like the idea, but you had a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes which really took away from the meaning. Also cursing (even when it is stared out) appears uneducated and does not portray emotion as well. Beyond that, it might have been nice to see some sentance variation especially with the starters. But I did like the message.

on Oct. 1 2013 at 3:44 pm
Smpowers13 SILVER, Lock Haven, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;I believe in everything until it&#039;s disproved. So I believe in fairies, the myths, dragons. It all exists, even if it&#039;s in your mind. Who&#039;s to say that dreams and nightmares aren&#039;t as real as the here and now?&rdquo; <br /> ― John Lennon

Very well written!