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It's Gone

September 23, 2014
By makdubs SILVER, Exton, Pennsylvania
makdubs SILVER, Exton, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"That's the thing about pain, it demands to be felt."


When you asked me what I wanted... I thought about him. Despite everything we have gone through. Both the good and the bad. All I wanted and craved was him and everything we once had shared. Maybe sometimes the bad outweighed the good, or the good outweighed the bad. But he was the reason that I had ever believed or experienced love. So when I told you what I wanted, I told you him. I finally came to admit that I had fallen for him more than I had ever wanted to. But now its gone; he's gone, and so is my hope for love. 


The author's comments:

I was inspired to write this piece because I believe that girls at a young age dedicate so much to one guy. And when the guy is done with her, or they break up, she feels a pain that she cannot explain to anyone. My point being in this passage is a part of this girl dies when this love/relstionship dies and after all this time she still wants him even if it hurts.


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