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Take me away

April 13, 2009
By xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD, Cottonwood, Idaho
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I look up toward the vacant skies
And let myself fall with tears in my eyes.
The water that surrounds me,
That wraps its way around me,
Is smooth as marble,
And cold as Ice.
I let myself go in a peaceful way
And with a smile on my face,
I let it take me away.

© Flynn O., Novato, CA

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Please comment on my poetry!! I like it even if you criticize it, it helps me see what i do wrong, and correct it. so please comment on it!!!
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