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Music

May 1, 2009
By sillyrabbit GOLD, St.louis, Missouri
sillyrabbit GOLD, St.louis, Missouri
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Music sweeps in and out of me
Like a a needle weaving in and out of cloth
Brushing my lips
Touching my heart
Cleansing me
And taking over me
Moving as softly as a bird's feather
Yet scarping against me like a stone
And shining like a star that has never shone

Torture and Pleasure become a blurry
As music surrounds me in its fury
And takes me farther into the depths of sound
Till I finally fall onto the ground
And become surrounded with others that have fallen down



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on Dec. 7 2009 at 7:36 pm
foreverdreaming14 PLATINUM, Redmond, Washington
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Very nice, short but sweet with very powerful words. :)

on Jun. 11 2009 at 9:44 pm
cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Be the best you an be as you can see i try to be by writing poetry.

GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD. I'm not a lair I'm not ling when I say Your Poetry is A-OK in every way. I love what you say.

on May. 27 2009 at 11:31 pm
sillyrabbit GOLD, St.louis, Missouri
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please rate!!