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Neon High

May 14, 2009
By Gena McMahon GOLD, Rochester, New York
Gena McMahon GOLD, Rochester, New York
19 articles 4 photos 6 comments

Don’t stop now
Falling forward
Note to note
Inch by inch
From first to last
Falling fast
All stuck in my...head

Restless how
Sinking further
Useless in this world
Don’t give a care
I’m run out and oh so bare…

Crippled making, hours breaking
Making the time
Of what’s left…

Don’t stop.
I know it’s useless but give it just one more chance…
At last…

My mind is f***ed up,
Time now to suck up
All the world as words before…

It doesn’t matter anymore
My dreams…
My dreams…


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on May. 19 2009 at 8:42 pm
Gena McMahon GOLD, Rochester, New York
19 articles 4 photos 6 comments
note*- i put myself out of my own shoes and write of others

on May. 19 2009 at 7:07 pm
KICK3593 PLATINUM, Roslyn Heights, New York
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it's a good poem, but you seem rather pessimistic here, as the character has lkittle revelation and is hardly resolved except by giving up.

If I'm interpreting wrong, please say so.