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Love Lays

May 17, 2009
By kaelyn GOLD, East Northport, New York
kaelyn GOLD, East Northport, New York
18 articles 95 photos 21 comments

Love lays
a path yet untrodden
by wary souls
awaiting in the cover
of an alluring morning mist.

The unassuming travelers
on their seperate journeys
with fate barring the way
through brambles and thicket
to bring them to the point
where their paths become entwined.

Two lost souls
joined at long last
on the same winding road
by one love
outlasting eternity.


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on Jul. 15 2009 at 10:48 pm
despurlock DIAMOND, Morgantown, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The heart has its reasons which reason does not know." -Pascal, Pensees, 1670

I love this poem! (esp. the theme :) It's beautfiul and descriptive while still allowing the reader to put their own image with it. Goregeous job! And thanks for the comment on my poem!