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Forever Need

May 25, 2009
By MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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&quot;Life&#039;s a mountain on a beach&quot;-Unknown<br /> &quot;Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It&#039;s remarkable how often those two traits coincide.&quot;-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

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I hate being tied down.
I love being free.
I need my space,
but know you're always there.

I hate feeling helpless.
I love being needed.
I need to hear,
how much you need me.

I love my quick thoughts.
I hate my understanding.
I need to get out the visions,
that push you and me together.

I love you,
Like no other.
I try to hate you,
So the love doesn't show through.
I should have known better-
to not push you away,
You're now in my heart-
Forever.

The author's comments:
Something I have done before that was one of the worst torchers i've felt. My advice to you- just accept it and it's a lot easier to deal with. Don't try to hide or run-away, it can only make it ten time's as worse.
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lydiagerges BRONZE said...
on Feb. 8 2019 at 11:50 am
lydiagerges BRONZE, Franklin, Wisconsin
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ive been reading some of your pieces and ur writing voice is good!! It would mean a lot if you could read my writing on my page and possibly give me some feedback??
MariaMarie DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 1 2010 at 1:12 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s a mountain on a beach&quot;-Unknown<br /> &quot;Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It&#039;s remarkable how often those two traits coincide.&quot;-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

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      :)     Np
MariaMarie DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 5:23 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s a mountain on a beach&quot;-Unknown<br /> &quot;Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It&#039;s remarkable how often those two traits coincide.&quot;-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

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Thanks again :)
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 1:33 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

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i LOVE this poem :)
ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 3 2009 at 4:09 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Some things will never change&quot;---Tupac

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I love how you use the oxymoron figure of speech in this piece! Thanks for the comment by the way! I appreciate it! :)