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Tears

May 27, 2009
By kp4696 BRONZE, New Lenox, Illinois
kp4696 BRONZE, New Lenox, Illinois
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My tears flow like rain.
Each tear is full of sorrow.
Crying is cleansing me.
It is a short burst of sadness.
Through the eyes.
Time is too fast.
Life is too short.
He didn't know it was his last day.
God took him like a theif!
So for him I cry.


The author's comments:
this is for all of my lost pets, and esppecially Gizzy, my most recent loss. I miss him so much, he was my buddy. i love you Giz.i miss u Giz. <3

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on Oct. 3 2011 at 10:55 pm
Awsomenes BRONZE, Chitris Hights, California
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if i live to be 1000, and say &quot;i love you&quot; evry secint non-stop, it wouldnt be enouf.

that was fir a pet!!! it was a awesome poum, it almost made me cry, but knowing that it was for a pet almost makes it seem like its a joke. not that im trying to be mean, you oveusly loved Gizzy a lot. 

Surrealist14 said...
on Jun. 15 2009 at 12:59 am
Surrealist14, Greenville, South Carolina
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that was a really sweet sad poem. I loved how short and simple it was.

on Jun. 10 2009 at 12:27 am
cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
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Be the best you an be as you can see i try to be by writing poetry.

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