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June 1, 2009
By reddlover_70017 SILVER, Springboro, Ohio
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If thou lovest me, then show me.

If thou showest me, then I shall decide.

If I decide that maybe I dost lovest thou back, then love shall cometh.

If love cometh, then we shall forever be together.

If forever never ends, then for all eternity we shall be together.

And throughout all eternity love shall be there to guide us.

If love guides us in the right directions, then even whence death do us part,

we shall still forever be as one.

Forever and ever

Forever and ever

© Belinda H., Palm Harbor, FL

The author's comments:
This is one of my shorter poems, but one of my favorites. The way the poem is written is almost in a foriegn language for some, but I think that is one of the reasons that it is brilliant. The person that inspired me to write this poem was my boyfriend. When I began writing the poem all I was thinking of was him and how far we had come together, and where it all started.Then, I continued to play around with the wording and form until I came up with the final product. well, I hope you like this poem!
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