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My own sedation

June 6, 2009
By robert3212 GOLD, Harlingen, Texas
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robert3212 GOLD, Harlingen, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
The opportunities in life are that which takes us away from normality.

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Will you miss me?
as i sit here crying
as i sit here no longer wanting
the love i feel.

will you think about me?
as i lay here dying
as i lay here only wanting
to heal, Oh! to heal!

will you even speak of me?
utter my name?
ask how i am?
anything?....anything?

No.....no you won't
you wont remember; love once shared
my heart is crumbling
my love unspared

A healing period
regeneration
what i need
my own sedation

© Megan S., Marblehead, MA

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sunrise_faerie GOLD said...
on Aug. 30 2010 at 2:43 pm
sunrise_faerie GOLD, Fredericksburg, Virginia
11 articles 3 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
things are only as dark as you make them. <br /> there is always beauty in every situation. look for it and you will see.<br /> smile; sometimes it&#039;s all that will keep you from crying.

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i love this! i'm going to check out more of your work :D

 

xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 17 2010 at 1:21 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 280 comments

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&quot;The goal isn&#039;t to live forever, but create something that will.&quot;<br /> &quot;If you wanna go, baby let&#039;s go; if you wanna rock, I&#039;m ready to roll.&#039;&#039;<br /> &quot;No one ever said it&#039;d be easy. They just said it&#039;d be worth it.&quot; &lt;3

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wow i luv this. its so meaningful & deep! i had 2 read it twicee;)) plz keep writing
isaa pants. said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 8:37 pm
i read this again :)
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD said...
on Apr. 4 2010 at 5:56 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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this is great. Its like im living in the moment, it seems very painful. Great job.
isaa pants. said...
on Jan. 28 2010 at 9:14 pm
wow robert. that was a great poem. the questions make it dramatic. good job :) i love it.
DJMarin said...
on Jan. 28 2010 at 8:56 pm
Wonderful pattern of symbols. Excellent work! You seem to get more hopeful every article.
emilyj93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2010 at 8:18 pm
emilyj93 GOLD, Naperville, Illinois
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wow I love your use of rhetorical questioning! This piece flows so well, good job!
Shannon_ GOLD said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 11:56 am
Shannon_ GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
12 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
For we are the children of The Lost Generation and Truth is blind.

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this is really great i love it! your work is just one after another great writing! 5 out 5
ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 21 2009 at 11:00 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

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&quot;Some things will never change&quot;---Tupac

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Oh my goodness. This is amazing. I feel exactly the same way as these words describe. I love this poem. Good job. I'm going to make it my favorite.