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Endless Road

July 1, 2009
By _NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
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_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
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There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.<br /> <br /> <br /> &ndash;Golly (Harriet The Spy)

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> I AM WALKING ON AN ENDLESS ROAD, THAT IS LEADING NOWHERE AT ALL.
> NO JOY, NO LOVE, JUST A MILE OF DESERT.
> I KNOW THAT I'M ALONE, ON A GLOOMY, GREY TRAIL.
> AS I RUN, I'M RUNNING FROM LIFE.
> NO ONE IS HOLDING MY HAND IN MY TRAVERSE:
> THAT IS WHAT STEALS LIGHT ON THE PATH.
> LOST COMPANIONS KEEPING THE WORLD DEAD.
> IF NOT SO, THE LAND /_WOULD_/ HAVE BEEN COLORFUL.
> THOUGH, NOW, I KNOW THAT I AM WRONG.
> BECAUSE IN THE DISTANCE, A NEW COLOR I SEE,
> I FEEL A REAL FEELING IN MY HEART:
> A RAY OF LIGHT IS JUST AHEAD -ON THE ENDLESS ROAD.

The author's comments:
Hi I am Huda and I wrote this poem when I was ten. I made another article called: Sacrifice. READ IT! Also, please rate and comment on my work!
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Falling GOLD said...
on Apr. 7 2010 at 11:44 pm
Falling GOLD, Bellingham, Washington
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My weakness is, I care to much. And the scars remind us, the past is real, I tear my heart open, just to feel.

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This is good. i like how it seems that the narrator has seemed to last hope, that life is nothing but a bleak gray road that never ends, and i like how you compoletly turn teh whole thing around with such easy adn flow. it's a really moving poem, makes me feel taht even when i think life isn't worth going on, that i shouldn't lose hope. Keep writing, you have alot of talent.
_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 7 2010 at 8:12 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.<br /> <br /> <br /> &ndash;Golly (Harriet The Spy)

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Thanks Elfiewrites! Duh of course I'll read your new article! Has it been approved yet?
elfiewrites BRONZE said...
on Apr. 7 2010 at 8:06 pm
elfiewrites BRONZE, Hillsdale, New Jersey
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&quot;The seat of knowledge is in the head, of wisdom, in the heart.&quot;~William Hazlitt<br /> &quot;Be yourself, everyone else is taken.&quot;

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I love this so much!! You have a talent for writing, and you should be VERY proud of yourself! Thank you so much for commenting on my article "Try To Remember." If you get the chance, may you please give me feedback on my newest article, "Is there Reason?" Thanks so much, and excellent work!
_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 6 2010 at 3:21 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.<br /> <br /> <br /> &ndash;Golly (Harriet The Spy)

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Lol, thanks!!!!!!!
SageSin GOLD said...
on Apr. 6 2010 at 9:38 am
SageSin GOLD, Oaklawn, Illinois
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&quot;Accept everything about yourself. I mean everything. You are you, and that is the beginning and the end; No apologies, no regrets.&quot;

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this is striking to be SURE! YOur GREAT! *CLICKS FAVORITES BUTTON  A MILLION TIMES*   >.> 

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////,..,^ <----FANG SAYS HE LOVES IT!

dreamgirl01 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 6 2010 at 9:01 am
dreamgirl01 BRONZE, NEW YORK CITY, New York
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No matter what color you are, everyone is equal and we are all human beings.

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u so good with poetry i keep on reading again and again good work
_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 10:02 am
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.<br /> <br /> <br /> &ndash;Golly (Harriet The Spy)

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Thanks so much!
_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 10:01 am
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.<br /> <br /> <br /> &ndash;Golly (Harriet The Spy)

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And by the way, I'm twelve years old right now, so I wrote this two years ago.
_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 10:00 am
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.<br /> <br /> <br /> &ndash;Golly (Harriet The Spy)

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Thanks so much! Well, I saved this in my computer, and when I posted this into Teenink, the arrows came on the sides, and it all went capital. Sorry, it was just perhaps a mistake. :)
SarClark BRONZE said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 9:28 am
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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Whoa!!!! You wrote this when you were TEN??? DANG! You're like amazing at writing. Do the capital letters signify something?? I really like this. Great job!!
_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 3 2010 at 9:35 am
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.<br /> <br /> <br /> &ndash;Golly (Harriet The Spy)

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Thanks all of you!
AlyssaFama SILVER said...
on Apr. 2 2010 at 10:58 pm
AlyssaFama SILVER, Kunkletown, Pennsylvania
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Most people want to be the sun that brightens your day. I&#039;d rather be the moon that shines down on you in your darkest hour.

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this was very well written!
Emmaxoxo said...
on Apr. 2 2010 at 10:55 am
great job! u did great. its a wonderful piece. hope to read more of ur writing pieces!
artandbooks16 SILVER said...
on Mar. 29 2010 at 8:13 pm
artandbooks16 SILVER, Lapeer, Michigan
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wow thats was good!
_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Mar. 28 2010 at 1:49 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.<br /> <br /> <br /> &ndash;Golly (Harriet The Spy)

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thanks

 

josiebelle SILVER said...
on Mar. 28 2010 at 12:05 pm
josiebelle SILVER, Waterford, Other
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good imagery!!