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August 16, 2009
By saby:)**** SILVER, Holyoke, Massachusetts
saby:)**** SILVER, Holyoke, Massachusetts
6 articles 8 photos 8 comments

You said you loved me
You said you needed me
you said you were never going to let me down.But here I am falling deep down the dark whole you threw me in.And just like that u said you didn't want to see me ever again.


The author's comments:
i just wanted to say that if a guy broke your heart don't give up, now or later your going to find the perfect guy o yor dreams.

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Lonleydandy said...
on Oct. 25 2009 at 11:50 am
I wouldn't worry about that, I have friends who can write MUCH better than I can, poetry is really all that I am good at. And thank you for your comments!!

on Oct. 23 2009 at 7:11 pm
saby:)**** SILVER, Holyoke, Massachusetts
6 articles 8 photos 8 comments
thx for the comment but my writting is never doin to be great as yours is

Lonleydandy said...
on Oct. 12 2009 at 6:59 pm
I like all of your writings...i can relate...haha...I always like a good poem that I can relate to.