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Where'd You Go

August 18, 2009
By Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

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Looking in my periphery
I see you standing close to me
And then I wonder why you're there
With reckless grin and windblown hair
Your sweet voice I can almost hear
But as I turn you disappear

© Jessica P., Bethel Park, PA

The author's comments:
I didn't realize this until after I wrote it, but every line has eight sylables.
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kiwi12 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 30 2010 at 5:13 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
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I like it, flows well, especially with all those 8 syllables! :)
Electricity PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 26 2009 at 11:13 am
Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
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Awwwwe. Hopelessly romantic! Fantastic Job!
E.Lee GOLD said...
on Aug. 25 2009 at 10:39 pm
E.Lee GOLD, Akron, Ohio
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haha ur right!! they all do have 8 syllables. i really like this one!!