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This__ I feel.

September 6, 2009
By MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s a mountain on a beach&quot;-Unknown<br /> &quot;Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It&#039;s remarkable how often those two traits coincide.&quot;-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

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This love I feel is burdened,
They're my family-
I shouldn't feel torn.
This pain I feel is over- baring,
Yet I'm laughing-
I should stop acting.
This disappointment is taking over.
Walls within walls
blocks it within me-
I shouldn't hold more in.

© Cassie H., Carmi, IL

The author's comments:
This may be one of the shortest poems I've ever wrote besides a Haiku and Limerick for school :) what do you think?
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littletigersheart said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 10:13 am
I can totally relate
MariaMarie DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 20 2009 at 6:10 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s a mountain on a beach&quot;-Unknown<br /> &quot;Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It&#039;s remarkable how often those two traits coincide.&quot;-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

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~* Thanks! *~
Kumanga DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 20 2009 at 5:34 am
Kumanga DIAMOND, Bethel, Alaska
56 articles 0 photos 95 comments

Favorite Quote:
Always Accept nd love urself for who u are!

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I think its pretyy kewl!! Great Job@!!