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Black Hole MAG

September 23, 2009
By liblib33 GOLD, Dedham, Massachusetts
liblib33 GOLD, Dedham, Massachusetts
18 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life sucks then you die-- yeah I should be so lucky.<br /> --Jacob &quot;Breaking Dawn&quot;


The big black hole
is sucking you in.
With their
mini-skirts
make-up
and thongs.
They're the ones taunting,
They're the ones teasing,
each time that
you do something wrong.
You tried so hard
to be flawless.
But nobody
is quite like them.
Somehow they find time
to fix their hair,
to chop off
the strings hanging from hems.
When they seem
to have no time at all.
You want to be like them.
But, why?
Just to be something you're not?
So put on that shirt
you've been dying to wear
since the first day of school,
That you've tucked away in your closet
because it didn't look cool.
You feel something
but you don't know what.
It's happiness
independence
free.



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on Oct. 20 2011 at 11:36 am
PeterJoseph SILVER, Brewster, New York
7 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Ticking clocks remind me that I&#039;m still alive; Taunting me with consistencies at this hectic time.

This is really good.  The flow of ideas is smooth does not seem forced.  I like the message and you should definitely keep writing.

liblib33 GOLD said...
on May. 6 2010 at 6:35 pm
liblib33 GOLD, Dedham, Massachusetts
18 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life sucks then you die-- yeah I should be so lucky.<br /> --Jacob &quot;Breaking Dawn&quot;

Thank you!

liblib33 GOLD said...
on May. 6 2010 at 6:34 pm
liblib33 GOLD, Dedham, Massachusetts
18 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life sucks then you die-- yeah I should be so lucky.<br /> --Jacob &quot;Breaking Dawn&quot;

Thank you so much I'm glad that something good came out of my writing this piece.

on Apr. 30 2010 at 10:16 pm
RadioShower PLATINUM, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
23 articles 5 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
Emo is imaginary - Gerard Way<br /> Normalness leads to sadness -Phil Lester (AmazingPhil)

You gatta rock to your oun song and that's what your doing! go you!!

 


doodlemonkey said...
on Apr. 30 2010 at 6:36 pm
doodlemonkey, La Palma, California
0 articles 19 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;One mans heart is greater than the mind of a genius.&quot; &quot;In life people forget things but the most dangerous thing forgotten is who we are.&quot; &quot;It takes skill to trip on flat surfaces.&quot; &quot;One makes all the differences in the world.&quot; -all by me (hailey)

i relate completely... and i'm proud to say that i don't care anymore what they think... i am my own personalized self and i'm damn proud of it no one can tell me who to be... i'm different

liblib33 GOLD said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 5:25 pm
liblib33 GOLD, Dedham, Massachusetts
18 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life sucks then you die-- yeah I should be so lucky.<br /> --Jacob &quot;Breaking Dawn&quot;

I would really love everyone to read this and get the full message. It's really important.