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thoughts: when love is lost.

September 28, 2009
By heretic-half-breed SILVER, Jim Thorpe, Pennsylvania
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live, laugh, love.<br /> <br /> do not lie cheat or drink. but if u must lie, lie in the arms of the one you love, if you must cheat, cheat death, and if you must drink, drink to those moments that take ur breath away.<br /> <br /> to be or not to be, that is the question

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this life so pointless.
so angering.
so unforgivable.
these thoughts so unending.
so sad.
so painful.
oh this knife.
how appealing it looks.
the crimson stain on its blade.
the blade of relief.
releasing my tears.
releasing my pain
prevoking the crimson rain.
a drop falls over, and over, to the ground.
but as my life ends, i hear not a sound.

© Krystal B., Bloomingdale , IL

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dragonfan SILVER said...
on Nov. 14 2009 at 8:00 pm
dragonfan SILVER, Arcidia, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Death truly makes an artist&quot;

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wow,you are a great writer this is amzing