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Best Friends Forever MAG

By Anonymous

   



We've been friends now,

for quite a while.

Through ups and downs,

tears and smiles.

All those letters ending,

best friends forever.

All those ideas,

some crazy, some clever.

We shared the bad times,

and the happiness,

We know our friendship,

would be nothing less.

The times we spent together,

I'll always keep in my heart.

We know these memories,

would last from the start.

Talking for hours on the phone,

you always had good advice to loan.

So I dedicate this poem to you,

because you're a friend who has stayed true!




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Amsterdamsel DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 10 2010 at 10:03 pm
Amsterdamsel DIAMOND, Henderson , Nevada
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It's cute, it sounds kind of childish....x3
Curly_Sue said...
on Jul. 10 2010 at 3:14 pm
Curly_Sue, Sand Springs, Oklahoma
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i love it. this poem really speaks to me. it reminds me of my best friend turned traitor (before she did of course) and my best friends right now that i would give the world to help. this is a very challenging feeling to put into writing and you've done it. great job! :)
ShenelleCrystal SILVER said...
on Jul. 10 2010 at 2:44 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

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this is really sweet , I like it & anyone can relate . Please check out my work and rate :)
MercedesXO DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 10 2010 at 10:43 am
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
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&quot;I realize that life is risks. It&#039;s acknowledging the past but looking forward. It&#039;s taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven.&quot; <br /> -The Dead Tossed Waves.

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this is sweet, and well written. I enjoyed it. i recently joined the site and my work hasn't yet been accepted, but when it is i'd love for you to view it and see wat you think.
Amily said...
on Jul. 10 2010 at 6:31 am
I like it.Such a beautiful poet!Come on!
coly33 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 18 2010 at 7:18 pm
coly33 BRONZE, Lyndhurst, New Jersey
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opps i mean memories
coly33 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 18 2010 at 7:17 pm
coly33 BRONZE, Lyndhurst, New Jersey
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awww i love it, it reminded me of my memors with my freinds and the ideas of our future memories

great poem

:)

baby_girla SILVER said...
on Jun. 18 2010 at 11:48 am
baby_girla SILVER, St.Mary&#39s, Alaska
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it is left by the imperfect work that the next one can be born(odelion redon)

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this is a real great piece and that is the truth. you can stay friends with one for a long time and still remember the glory days. is it all right if I use this for my graduation in 2012?
Eternally17 SILVER said...
on Jun. 18 2010 at 6:31 am
Eternally17 SILVER, Dubai, Other
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&quot;There exists no heaven and no hell, nothing to look forward to after we have gone to ashes; live every moment NOW, and make things happen the way you want to in this lifetime; not the next.&quot;

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Good one; very simply written yet conveys a poignant truth so close to home!

I love it :)

Nanner BRONZE said...
on Jun. 10 2010 at 1:43 pm
Nanner BRONZE, Elizabethton, Tennessee
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So very easy to relate to. I enjoyed reading it. :)
LA CHIKKAH LOCA said...
on Jun. 9 2010 at 8:15 pm
DiS SOUNdS AL0t lykkk My H0MiTA Ndd ME :)
olympian-queen said...
on May. 27 2010 at 4:59 pm
olympian-queen, Charleston, South Carolina
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Yesterday is history. Tommorrow is a mystery. And today? Today is a gift that&#039;s why they call it the present.

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beef it up!!!

try using more advanced vocabulary. give the reader a image of what kind of friend she he/she is and why she is your friend. you can say she is a good friend but.....the reader doesn't want to just take your word for it..they want to feel it..absorb it.. and believe it. so just add a little more..umph!

GracieLynn BRONZE said...
on May. 27 2010 at 1:51 pm
GracieLynn BRONZE, Chehalis, Washington
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&quot;Life isn&#039;t about the breaths we take, it&#039;s about the moments that take our breath away.&quot; -Unknown

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I really liked this. My best friend's graduating this year and it's really hard on me. This poem is exactly how our friendship is:)
luv2swim BRONZE said...
on May. 27 2010 at 10:04 am
luv2swim BRONZE, Corona, California
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&quot;For every beauty there is an eye to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.&quot;<br /> -Ivan Panin

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Hey this was great!! You did a really good job! Do you think you could read some of my work? Thanks!!
Cuore GOLD said...
on May. 5 2010 at 9:16 pm
Cuore GOLD, Saint Augustine, Florida
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Be the change you wish to see- Ghandi<br /> <br /> Everything in this room is eatable, even I&#039;m eatable, but that my dears is called cannibalism and is highly frowned upon in most societies.- Willy Wonka<br /> <br /> Bright lights often blind those who can&#039;t see. ~

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nice although I would change know to knew
EleanorRigby PLATINUM said...
on May. 5 2010 at 4:45 pm
EleanorRigby PLATINUM, New York City, New York
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&quot;The optomist proclaims we live in the best of worlds, and the pessimist fears this is true.&quot; - James Branch Cabell

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this is like a poem you'd see in a greeting card
Baby.Boo PLATINUM said...
on May. 5 2010 at 9:32 am
Baby.Boo PLATINUM, Casper, Wyoming
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&quot;If you obey the rules you miss all the fun!&quot;<br /> - Katharine Hepburn

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oh my gosh i loved it
rose96 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 4:59 pm
rose96 BRONZE, Marietta, Georgia
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&quot;Shoot for the moon; even if you miss, you&#039;ll land among the stars.&quot;

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I love that sooo much! It is a really amazing poem!
Patience97 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 12:02 pm
Patience97 PLATINUM, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
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&quot;People believe that if we really want to eliminate something, focus on that. How much sense does it make for us to give the particular problem all of the energy, as opposed to focusing on trust, love, living in abundance, education, or peace? -Un.

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I think it is really sweet, and it is a way that I could describe my friends, as well as a way they could describe me. It's lovely :)
beautiful.agony BRONZE said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 10:35 am
beautiful.agony BRONZE, Tonawanda, New York
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love has no distance :)

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this poem really expresses the way friends should be, i thinks its great.