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The Other Side of the Sky MAG

December 31, 2009
By Elizabeth Ridolfi SILVER, Auburn, California
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Elizabeth Ridolfi SILVER, Auburn, California
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From the other side
I watch you
Never speaking but smiling silently
I drift in and out
Through open windows, carried by the wind
I’m unseen, but smiling
Through the holes on a chain-link fence
Spaces between piano keys
The place between teeth on a comb
I laugh unheard
I love unfelt
I’m unseen but smiling
As I look from the other side.

In memory of Uncle David

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ventureroftheunknown BRONZE said...
on Mar. 24 2011 at 11:58 am
ventureroftheunknown BRONZE, Adell, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
you don't have to keep me falling, but it'd sure be cool if you did.

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I really enjoy your work and admire you thouroughly. I am an aspiring poet and working on becoming a better story writer. Great voice and adjectives :)
Logan1315 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 15 2010 at 9:10 pm
Logan1315 BRONZE, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I&#039;m not sure about the universe.&quot;<br /> -Albert Einstein<br /> <br /> &quot;Play the man, Master Ridley; we shall this day light a candle, by God&#039;s grace in England, as I trust shall never be put out.&quot;<br /> -Latimer

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Wow I really like this.  There is some really good imagery and it makes sense without having to read it over again.  Actually I did read it over again but only because I liked it so much.