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A Hearts Clock

January 22, 2010
By Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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I've been counting every hour
That I haven't seen your face
You are now the cause
Of every tear I waste

I hide it with fake laughter
A lie in every smile
Every second I wonder why
It's been such a long while

The weeks go crawling by
I long to hold you close
I'm starving for your love
And withering like a rose

It seems like forever
Yet I guess I'll wait
For I'll always want you
And that shall be my fate

© Joseph S., San Anselmo, CA

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Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Oct. 21 2010 at 9:59 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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Thanks for the comments and ratings. I totally understand
SamiLynn PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 19 2010 at 11:43 pm
SamiLynn PLATINUM, Anthem, Arizona
20 articles 9 photos 137 comments

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&quot;The unexamined life is not worth living.&quot; ~Socrates

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I can definitely relate. I moved away from the guy I liked, and this poem reminds me exactly of how i feel
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Aug. 25 2010 at 9:23 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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Thanks for the comments and ratings everyone you made my day:)
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 23 2010 at 10:34 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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I do love the rhyming scheme captain.and i love the title. and i love the concept. run on sentences-i know. do your dance. i love you captain.
mudpuppy BRONZE said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 6:49 pm
mudpuppy BRONZE, Orangeburg, South Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 475 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of cheese and flower petal sometimes it&#039;s soft and sweet, sometimes it just plain stinks. - M.J.

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The burning of heartache and love brilliant!
riley... GOLD said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 1:39 pm
riley... GOLD, Yakima, Washington
13 articles 0 photos 73 comments

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&quot;i became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.&quot; edgar allen poe.

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maybe my favorite poem by you. a great combination of playful rhyme and deep messages. you have a lot of talent!!! :)
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 10:57 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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thank you:)
momo12 SILVER said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 8:27 pm
momo12 SILVER, Sebastopol, California
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&quot;I Think Therefore I Am&quot;

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wow... im sorta blown away i really like this it has to be my favorite
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Jul. 17 2010 at 2:41 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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My head. . . sometimes when I'm tired ideas for poems or stories pop up and i write them down then fix them in the morning.
yes_i_am SILVER said...
on Jul. 16 2010 at 7:32 am
yes_i_am SILVER, Faizabad, Other
6 articles 1 photo 38 comments

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&quot;not all those who wander are lost&quot;

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hey whr do u get such beautiful ideas?
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Jun. 30 2010 at 8:37 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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thank you:)       
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Jun. 29 2010 at 6:42 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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thanx so much:)
mwahxandxmwa SILVER said...
on Jun. 29 2010 at 6:29 pm
mwahxandxmwa SILVER, Melbourne, Other
6 articles 0 photos 135 comments

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&quot;Silence is golden...duct tape is silver&quot; - a random T-shirt

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You have rapped in a perfectly worded pakage what so many others feel -including me- you have a way by taking sadness, but not making it depressing you make it a statement.

Another one to be proud of :D

PrincessPineapple GOLD said...
on Jun. 22 2010 at 8:08 pm
PrincessPineapple GOLD, Chesapeake, Virginia
18 articles 0 photos 46 comments

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&quot;To love someone is to learn the song that is in their heart, and sing it to them when they have forgotten.&quot; ~unknown

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so sad! but really good!
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2010 at 8:36 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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Thank you it means alot to me:)
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Jun. 15 2010 at 8:32 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1979 comments

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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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aww beautiful!!! it flows wonderfully altogether and its romanticly put!! excellentt:)
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2010 at 8:18 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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Thanx:)                  
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 9:41 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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Thank you:)
Authorgal98 GOLD said...
on Jun. 5 2010 at 1:20 pm
Authorgal98 GOLD, Frankort, Illinois
17 articles 0 photos 194 comments

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&quot;Let your mind sart a journey through a strange new world...&quot;

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Another lovely, true, engaging poem! My favorite so far!
KosuKovu13 SILVER said...
on Jun. 3 2010 at 6:48 pm
KosuKovu13 SILVER, Hobart, Indiana
8 articles 4 photos 51 comments

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&quot;Tormented by the demon of literature.&quot; ~ Gaston Leroux, author of the Phantom of the Opera

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Ah. my mistake. Those are the two most popular, so it was more of an educated guess than anything.