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As the world turns

February 1, 2010
By Emiline SILVER, Nashville, Tennessee
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"When deep injury is done to us, we will never recover until we forgive. Forgiveness cannot change the past. But it does enlarge the future."- Mary Karen Read

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As the world turns,
as it starts to shimmer,
the shimmer dims and becomes a glimmer.
And that glimmer is the most important thing of all,
because it means the darkness has yet to fall.
It means there is still hope, peace, and love left in our world,
and it also means that smiles still rain down from above.

© Jesse V., Sewickey, PA

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Please don't let the glimmer go.
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Emiline SILVER said...
on May. 15 2010 at 1:41 pm
Emiline SILVER, Nashville, Tennessee
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"When deep injury is done to us, we will never recover until we forgive. Forgiveness cannot change the past. But it does enlarge the future."- Mary Karen Read

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Awesome, thanks, y'all!
Schnoodlebear SILVER said...
on May. 15 2010 at 11:12 am
Schnoodlebear SILVER, Ballwin, Missouri
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I liked it. I tend t agree with the other comment. Myabe the sentences should be a bit shorter but other that that is was amazing!

 

Emiline SILVER said...
on May. 3 2010 at 4:36 pm
Emiline SILVER, Nashville, Tennessee
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When deep injury is done to us, we will never recover until we forgive. Forgiveness cannot change the past. But it does enlarge the future."- Mary Karen Read

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thanks, lol. It means alot.
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on May. 3 2010 at 7:54 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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hey that was reallllllll nicce ^^ i loved it so so much!!
BobbysGirl said...
on Apr. 9 2010 at 8:35 pm

yeah im with Niki...But i still like it! good job! :}

 

Emiline SILVER said...
on Apr. 9 2010 at 8:08 pm
Emiline SILVER, Nashville, Tennessee
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;When deep injury is done to us, we will never recover until we forgive. Forgiveness cannot change the past. But it does enlarge the future.&quot;- Mary Karen Read

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Thank you so much!
_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 9 2010 at 7:06 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
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There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.<br /> <br /> <br /> &ndash;Golly (Harriet The Spy)

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The same as your username! Haha! Love this work you wrote!
Nikiblue PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 8:35 pm
Nikiblue PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
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&quot;Stupid Is As Stupid Does.&quot; -Forest Gump (;<br /> &quot;No one who achieves success does so without the help of others. The wise and confident acknowledge this help with gratitude.&quot;

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It was ok. My suggestion would be not to make the sentences so long. Also in the beginning I would have worded it as:

As the world turns,

It starts to shimmer.

The shimmer dims,

Becoming a glimmer.