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June 5, 2010
By crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Where do words go when they get erased?
Do they go to some secret and faraway place?
Or go into your eraser- is that what they do?
Waiting patiently there to be born anew?
Do they climb up your body, and back into your brain?
Do they just fall off of your paper, with patters like rain?
Do they hide under desks, make homes under chairs,
Do they sneak into your clothes through your rips and tears?
Do they fly into the sky, float off all about,
Til they find a new pencil from which to come out?
Are they stored by some person, in boxes, on shelves?
Well I guess we’ll never know,
Until that day comes,
When we get erased ourselves.

© Victor K., Las Vegas, NV

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crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 6:03 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Yeah def!!!
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 6:03 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thankyou so much!!! thats great!!!
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 2:22 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
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It&#039;s not about success; it&#039;s about significance.<br /> <br /> No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

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Wow. Just wow. This is so amazing. Seriously, I'm in love with this. You have such talent for writing. If you want, could you check out some of my work too? And please keep writing, you're really good.
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 29 2010 at 6:23 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
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&quot;See in what peace a Christian can die.&quot; - Joseph Addison<br /> &quot;How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?&quot;

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HOLY......CRUD....... this is NOT good, its not magnificent. none of those. ITS EXTRAORDINARY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u rule girl!!!!! while other ppl ramble when they try to rhyme, you keep to the topic and rock that poem!!
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 29 2010 at 6:11 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thanks so much!! u too!!!
MercedesXO DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 29 2010 at 11:52 am
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
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&quot;I realize that life is risks. It&#039;s acknowledging the past but looking forward. It&#039;s taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven.&quot; <br /> -The Dead Tossed Waves.

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I love this as well. Really really great work. I am soo fond of your writing. You have incredible talent.
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 6:56 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thanks soo much!!!!!
smilebright BRONZE said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 4:18 pm
smilebright BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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&quot;Your only in trouble if you get caught&quot;- Aladdin

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I love it! You perfected this poem. Thanks for comenting on my work
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 10:21 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thankyou soo much!!!!
.riley.bonjour.la.freek. GOLD said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 10:18 pm
.riley.bonjour.la.freek. GOLD, Charlotte, North Carolina
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It&#039;s not about where you are, it&#039;s about who you are. -Riley (me)<br /> do you remember when you were four, and everything was possible? I remember those days, but dang, i gotta get back to reality. -Riley (me)

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this poem was amazing! wow

 

crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 10:58 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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hahaha!! thanx!!!
x-unknown BRONZE said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 10:47 pm
x-unknown BRONZE, North Ridgeville, Ohio
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I love the subject, its so cute! I like how you rhyme until the last few lines, it ties it up nicely. Now I really wonder what happens to the words I delete in Microsoft Word... :P
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 3:31 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thanks!!!!
kayla62218 SILVER said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 1:54 pm
kayla62218 SILVER, Copake, New York
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I love this! It has a really great rhythem and the topic is unlike anything I've heard before. Keep up the good work!!
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 9:54 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thankyou!!!!
MitchB. SILVER said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 10:44 am
MitchB. SILVER, Lol, Florida
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&quot;just when the caterpillar thought the world was over, it became a butterfly&quot;

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great poem!
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 20 2010 at 7:24 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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:) thanx!!!!
carly... GOLD said...
on Jul. 20 2010 at 12:49 pm
carly... GOLD, Shorewood, Illinois
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Just because I&#039;m not happy does not mean I&#039;m depressed

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Wow... intense.  But it gets you thinking
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 18 2010 at 9:20 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thanks!!!!!
Sania GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2010 at 4:44 pm
Sania GOLD, Aroura, Colorado
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wow i love this poem its really and truly great i have never heard any thing like this why dont you check out some more of mine.