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September 10, 2010
By elisianicole101 PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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Your my sky,
when my days are good,
you block out the horrible things.
Your my sun,
and you're not afraid to burn me,
by telling me what i dont want to hear,
but you care enough to make everything bright.
During the night,
when everything is dark and stormy,
you're there even when i can't see you,
you're the stars that make everything,
a little brighter even when,
my world is upside down.

© Sarah C., Hillsdale, NJ

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elisianicole101 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 10 2010 at 11:26 pm
elisianicole101 PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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Thank you soooooooooo much(:
.AKA. DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 10 2010 at 6:19 pm
.AKA. DIAMOND, Cumming, Georgia
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Love it. Great job!
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 28 2010 at 6:01 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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You're welcome! Can't wait till i can read new poems!
Angel1932 PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 26 2010 at 12:54 am
Angel1932 PLATINUM, Antioch, California
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&quot;Love can touch us one time and last for a lifetime&quot; ~ Celine Dion<br /> &quot;If you&#039;re going to pray don&#039;t worry... if you&#039;re going to worry don&#039;t pray.&quot; ~ Mariah Carey

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excellent job, its really deep, u should be proud, please comment on my poem i would love to get ur feedback.
elisianicole101 PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 25 2010 at 9:22 pm
elisianicole101 PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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Nothing ever truely dies, it just transforms into something beautiful

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i feel special now!! lol thanks gurl! i'm glad you like it(:
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 25 2010 at 9:06 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Omg Elisia! I love it! It gets better everytime i read it! It's beautiful! 5 STARS!