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Life goes on

October 16, 2010
By a-skaar SILVER, Acworth, Georgia
a-skaar SILVER, Acworth, Georgia
7 articles 3 photos 2 comments

Life goes on
Even when we can’t stand to move
Even when there’s something we’re trying to prove

Life goes on
Even when we want to shut down
Even when all we can do is frown

Life goes on
Even when we have a broken heart
Even when all we want to do is fall apart

Life goes on
Even when we want to be left behind
Even when all we want to do is rewind

Life goes on
Even when we think it shouldn’t
Even when we want to believe it couldn’t

Life goes on
The only thing that’s never a surprise in life
It goes on

The author's comments:
I wrote this at the end of the 2009-2010 school year for my creative writing class portfolio.

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S M Wells said...
on Nov. 2 2010 at 6:57 am
If that's true, you did it very well.

a-skaar SILVER said...
on Nov. 1 2010 at 9:31 pm
a-skaar SILVER, Acworth, Georgia
7 articles 3 photos 2 comments

thanks :]

i'm actually a very happy person, and usually write about happy things... this poem isn't about me

i just like to challenge myself my putting myself in someone else's shoes


on Nov. 1 2010 at 8:39 am
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
22 articles 0 photos 294 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some truths best left unspoken.

I'm sure thousends of teenagers have felt that way. I used to. But it makes my hart ache reading poems like this. because I don't know how to help. Trust me when I say, happyness comes frome the heart. I know longer look for reasons to not be happy. And niether do I look for reasons to be happy. I simply don't dwell on whats not pleasant. I refuse to feel sorry for myself. It's realy that simple. But it takes years to figure out if you don't want it to help. I hope you will try it. I shall not forget this. Even if you do. Good poem.