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the world

October 30, 2010
By t.i.m.n_w PLATINUM, Iqaluit, Other
t.i.m.n_w PLATINUM, Iqaluit, Other
30 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
When oppertunites come, don't be afraid to try for them, they might open doors to bigger and better things.


the world is in my hand,
rotten to the core,
filled with garbage and despression,
yet,
the sun keeps on shinning,
and the smiles keep returning.


The author's comments:
it's a poem about no matter how bad the world seems to feel, you can always find the positive, that's what "the sun keeps on shining,
and the smiles keep returning"

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on Nov. 16 2010 at 8:06 pm
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
16 articles 2 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!

this is a great piece! it puts the point out there and gives you enough details to see it. And I know what you mean, it's good to have a first comment. Keep up the good work! please rate and comment mine! thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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on Nov. 15 2010 at 7:36 pm
t.i.m.n_w PLATINUM, Iqaluit, Other
30 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
When oppertunites come, don't be afraid to try for them, they might open doors to bigger and better things.

thanks, i was worried that it was too harsh and stuff......it means alot to me to have my first comment!!! ;)

on Nov. 12 2010 at 9:44 am
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
16 articles 2 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!

hey! this is great, its short but to the point. I really love this. Please rate and comment in my work.  5***** (stars)