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It Is All Over

November 23, 2010
By CharleeVan GOLD, Lincoln, Nebraska
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&quot;How do you feel? That is the question, but I forget you don&#039;t expect an easy answer. When something like a soul becomes initialized and folded up like paper dolls and little notes you can&#039;t expect a bit of hope...&quot;<br /> -Stone Sour &quot;Through the Glass&quot;

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Searching for the words to say,
and hope we say anything at all,
But all words are lost inside,
And so we stumble and we fall.

Darkness lurking in the light,
Fighting to break free.
This darkness hides inside.
One more cut and it takes over me.

I falter under pressure,
pushing down until i suffocate.
This burden on my shoulders
Only feeds my hate.

I gave you all i ever had,
my heart, soul, and mind,
But you chose to let me go
and leave what we had behind.

© Tinh V., Monte Vista, CO

The author's comments:
I just think that relationships are really hard and people never actually take the time to consider why a seemingly good relationship will go spiraling downward. I wrote this poem when I realized why my relationship went wrong.
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