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Peices

October 26, 2011
By stillheartless PLATINUM, Eugene, Oregon
stillheartless PLATINUM, Eugene, Oregon
40 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you. I love you. I send this message through my fingers and into his, up his arm and into his heart. Hear me. I love you. And I'm sorry to leave you." -Jenny Downham


Kill me now but if you don’t have the time
Please commit some other fatal crime
Cloud of bullets coming my way
What a perfectly awful day
Chain down the darkness, don’t let it through
Set it on fire, Darling I need you
Drown the silence in your sorrow
Cry for today, cry for tomorrow
Shred me to pieces, tear me apart
Like a black hole, swallow my heart


The author's comments:
Told you I was morbid.

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on Aug. 18 2012 at 8:31 pm
writer3499 GOLD, New Bedford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;it&#039;s impossible to live without failing at something, unless you live so cautiously that you might has well not have lived at all-in which case you fail by default.&quot;<br /> -J.K.Rowling

OMG WOW i love this sooooo much!! wow you are crazy talented...this needs to be published! I can't belive its not in the magazine!! One of the best poems I have ever read this is deffety 5 stars and one of my favourties!  This is deep and sad but still beautiful! Please keep writing!!!!!!!!

on Dec. 11 2011 at 5:03 pm
stillheartless PLATINUM, Eugene, Oregon
40 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I love you. I love you. I send this message through my fingers and into his, up his arm and into his heart. Hear me. I love you. And I&#039;m sorry to leave you.&quot; -Jenny Downham

OMG! thank you!

on Dec. 5 2011 at 9:18 am
musicidraw PLATINUM, Manton, Michigan
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This is amazing I love it!!!