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Our Time

December 27, 2011
By BlondeAndProud PLATINUM, Corseaux, Other
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And by the way, everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. The worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt. ~Sylvia Plath

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I hated you counting our minutes,
Heartbeats ticking,
Now I'm alone I can't stop counting them.
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© Ashton D., Vincennes, IN

The author's comments:
Most relationships have a deadline, some more obvious than others, but its when they're over that you realise how much you had and for how long. Sometimes it's not always clear what is missing until its gone. Even time itself.
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brjf rjékw said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 10:26 am
brjf rjékw, London, Other
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I totally get this, its fantastic
Lola said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 6:42 am
Love it makes me fee sad