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Teen life!!!!!

March 21, 2012
By earthhashope SILVER, Earth, Other
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earthhashope SILVER, Earth, Other
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You alone are enough. You don&#039;t have to prove yourself to anybody. <br /> Trust dreams. Trust your heart. Trust your story.<br /> Earth without trees is like pizza without cheese!!!<br /> Humanity is like an ocean. If one drop gets polluted, the entire ocean doesn&#039;t.

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Teenage! A world of amazement and colour,
Phosphorescent, ecstatic and full of vigour,
Vibrant as a rainbow, sparkling like a diamond,
It covers the world in a bright halo,
Filling one’s mind with credo,
Infinitesimal problems, a thousand hugs,
Every little mistake- Shucks!
Love and friendship prime,
Afflicting feelings a crime
So make it a better realm for dwelling
Bad thoughts shutting out and quelling!

© Jiraporn R., Cerritos, CA

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DanielM. said...
on Apr. 22 2012 at 3:08 am
Thats awesome.
Rain. SILVER said...
on Apr. 8 2012 at 7:48 am
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
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No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

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This is utterly amazing, it makes me think very bright and possitive thoughts
earthhashope SILVER said...
on Mar. 27 2012 at 9:28 am
earthhashope SILVER, Earth, Other
9 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
You alone are enough. You don&#039;t have to prove yourself to anybody. <br /> Trust dreams. Trust your heart. Trust your story.<br /> Earth without trees is like pizza without cheese!!!<br /> Humanity is like an ocean. If one drop gets polluted, the entire ocean doesn&#039;t.

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Thank you very much!!!!
KateLA GOLD said...
on Mar. 26 2012 at 6:31 pm
KateLA GOLD, Everett, Washington
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Don&rsquo;t you find it Funny that after Monday(M) and Tuesday(T), the rest of the week says WTF?<br /> -Unknown

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You used great descriptions! I just loved the way you wrote this and you used various words like phosphorescent, vibrant, infinitesimal-that were really impressive and creative. You did a wonderful job!
Anonymous_Love BRONZE said...
on Mar. 26 2012 at 3:21 pm
Anonymous_Love BRONZE, Lincoln, Arkansas
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&quot;Sometimes, love isn&#039;t so much about holding on, as it is letting go.&quot;-Anonymous

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Nice poem! It was true, too. Bravo. Keep writing. :)
Midnight_Starsong GOLD said...
on Mar. 26 2012 at 7:06 am
Midnight_Starsong GOLD, Wesson, Mississippi
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She never once gave up. My mom is my hero.

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I really enjoy it keep writing.