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Melancholy

January 1, 2013
By rockyyyyyyyyy SILVER, Lawrenceville, Georgia
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rockyyyyyyyyy SILVER, Lawrenceville, Georgia
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dont let people drive u crazy if you know its in walking distance

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Below the shifting moon
of winters temperament un-kept,
The drugged and waining waves
Wail Poseidon's weeping roar.

© Adam P., Goleta, CA

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Just my thoughts on higher power(god). I created an irony using Poseidon because he is one of the many gods in Greek mythology. And I just wanted to show the thought of there being a higher power behind even a god.
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Mckay ELITE said...
on May. 15 2013 at 7:48 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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I love the image you paint. And the thought you convey. Very deep. And clever like I imagine you would be. HAHA. You're more deeper than you protray to be on the chatting rooms. I really like this. Awesome poem, Rocky.
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM said...
on May. 1 2013 at 4:25 pm
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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&quot;No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist.&quot;<br /> - Oscar Wilde

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hahahaha same I guess it was about the ocean?
Fallen_ PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 29 2013 at 8:30 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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&quot; a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness&quot;

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No idea exactly what this is about but i love how you used imagry and the ocean, and the amazing greek god posiedon :3