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Who reigns over Posieden

January 1, 2013
By rockyyyyyyyyy SILVER, Lawrenceville, Georgia
rockyyyyyyyyy SILVER, Lawrenceville, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
dont let people drive u crazy if you know its in walking distance


Below Poseidon's mighty waves,
Where seraphs dwelt for a century,
The burgeoning stench of the sick and slain
thrive in beautiful infamy.
Before the divine diference of night and day-
When earth was but a reverie
and the exulting mystic moon
bore the tumult of the sea-


A whisper roamed the sacred sphere,
resounding over her lush vegetation
and grasped the lost and forgotten leer
embroidered with burgeoning hatred.
Then,when still and silence befell the earth,
A roaring siren rang out with glee,
for it was the beginning of creation
when the moon cursed the silent sea.


The author's comments:
this the final of a two series poem(s). They both question the true authority of a gods power putting in perspective that there will always be a higher power for any higher power(god) that exists.

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on May. 31 2013 at 1:31 pm
poeticlove143 GOLD, St. Martinville, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
" The Lord is my Shepherd there is nothing I shall want" Psalm 23:1

Aye funny thing I just finish reading the Odyssey and I seen that the name Poseiden had popped out at me. This is really deep and to me I think that everyone has a dark and mysterious side which is poetry through your own purpose. This is an excellent piece but I think that you went a lil bit too deep but overall I liked it.  

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on May. 15 2013 at 7:54 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

I'm with Grace. These poems are deep. Dude, you're like Edgar Allen Freakin Poe. I see his elements in your poetry. This is awesome. Imagery, metaphors, and personification. No way you're a teen. Or are you...? -_- 

on Mar. 29 2013 at 8:33 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness&quot;

Are you really a teen because n your poems you sound full of wisdom and amazment to the world yet again i love your style flow and above al the indephtness in all your things