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Inspired

April 10, 2013
By -Hopeless- GOLD, Hudson, Indiana
-Hopeless- GOLD, Hudson, Indiana
16 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The lines that have no rhyme, are the ones that mean the most&quot; -Me-<br /> <br /> &quot;Are you with me, or will you fall to your knees?&quot; - We came as romans-


Pain goes on layer upon layer.
It hurts to the point you pull out your hair.
How does one beat it?
Do we accept defeat?
How long until life and death meet.
Now were bowing at it's feet.
Begging for mercy it's a bitter-sweet.
Of all the things, we never wanted this.
Must hold on, we know we are His.
When life gets you down,
Don't forget who wears the crown!
This 'ain't over just yet.
Life and death have only just met.
Pain is over, eternity ahead.
This is what it is like, just to be dead.
No more change, all over now.
We bare the weight from all the times we would bow.
A single tear,
No more fear.
A love that cannot be topped.
He loves us, that can't be stopped.
Have faith and don't give up on this place.
Only through Him do we get grace.
Inspiration, something we can't fake.
But from it, are the life lessons we take.
So never forget the some day perfect world,
It will come soon.
Times are going to change, look, a blood-red moon.
What does this all symbolize?
Who distinguishes the truth from lies?
Can you really be perfect?
Is it okay to get yourself down for being imperfect?
I think it's wrong, we know you can't be.
Why not open your eyes and see?
Stop crying,
This whole world is dying.
Time to live like your last day,
And I thought I didn't have the words to say.
-Hopeless-


The author's comments:
I wrote this in middle of the night I suppose, I typed it up on my ipod and didn't remember writing it :S

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on Jun. 16 2013 at 12:21 am
-Hopeless- GOLD, Hudson, Indiana
16 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The lines that have no rhyme, are the ones that mean the most&quot; -Me-<br /> <br /> &quot;Are you with me, or will you fall to your knees?&quot; - We came as romans-

I absolutely love you. I don't know when you posted this but I never saw it until now. I am so greatufl to have someone willing to read my stuff like you do, and I honestly need to get more stuff posted and written, I have been slacking, sorry!  

on Apr. 21 2013 at 1:27 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

Hey there. As I get older I can only wish to become a writer like you. I mean, you just wrote this in the middle of the night. How can you write something so perfect like that? Just goes to show how much talent and passion you have. Seriously, you're great. I have gotten to where I read poems out loud now nstead of in my head, they seem that much more personal when I do that.. I have to say, yours always seem to sound the best. It's like I am reading my favorite book almost. It just rolls off the tongue so fluently. The way you ask questions in this is great! I had never thought of some of these questions, but as I read them I tried to answer them and I can't. SO mysterious. At this line, OMG, 'How long until life and death meet.' You had me right there. But, then I read the next one and I was just like okay, that's it, this is absolutely perfect. 'Now were bowing at it's feet.' WOW times infinity. That's all I have to say. The ending sums eveyrhting up without actually summing it up. You do that so well, saying things without saying them. Never stop writing and I'll never stop commenting. (: Haha!