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Falling off The Deep End

October 21, 2013
By TheGirlUnknown SILVER, Winnfield, Louisiana
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Falling, falling, falling
Off the deep end.
It's been broken so long, it's something life can't mend.
I keep my head up & stay strong,
But the life I run is pulling me along.
Is there any way to stop it?
My life is engulfed by the fire lit.
Questions run through my mind
As I'm falling, falling, falling.
Poof!

© Rebecca B., Santa Clara, CA

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Myvoice4change SILVER said...
on Dec. 28 2013 at 4:31 pm
Myvoice4change SILVER, Other, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything will be ok in the end. If it's not okay, it's not the end."

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This is very nicely written! I like the way you wrote it, and again you rhyme while. I like how at the beginning you put "falling, falling, falling" and at the end you said "poof!" I gave you 5 stars!