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March 5, 2014
By Paradisaically BRONZE, Charlottesville, Virginia
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Roseate,
cerulean,
cotton candy
smiles at children's
lips. The glow tinges chapped
skin as kisses are placed upon the clouds.

© Kena A., Huntsville, AL

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Paradisaically BRONZE said...
on Mar. 9 2014 at 1:42 pm
Paradisaically BRONZE, Charlottesville, Virginia
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Thank you so so much Ellie!  That means a lot to me :)
411Ellie PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 9 2014 at 1:41 pm
411Ellie PLATINUM, Fridley, Minnesota
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*came   hehe
411Ellie PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 9 2014 at 1:40 pm
411Ellie PLATINUM, Fridley, Minnesota
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I love poems that compare aspects of nature to everyday objects! This poem is ingenious! Phenomenal word choice (I had to look some words up :) and fantastic imagery. This is a very original poem. As I read it, my senses come alive! 5/5!   
Paradisaically BRONZE said...
on Mar. 9 2014 at 1:20 pm
Paradisaically BRONZE, Charlottesville, Virginia
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Thank you so much!!
ImmortalRose GOLD said...
on Mar. 9 2014 at 1:19 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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This is beautiful. I am not sure what Roseate is so I must go look it up. Great imagery.