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Carnival Clouds

March 5, 2014
By Paradisaically BRONZE, Charlottesville, Virginia
Paradisaically BRONZE, Charlottesville, Virginia
3 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I taught you to fight and to fly, what more could there be?" - J.M Barrie


Roseate,
cerulean,
cotton candy
smiles at children's
lips. The glow tinges chapped
skin as kisses are placed upon the clouds.



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on Mar. 9 2014 at 1:42 pm
Paradisaically BRONZE, Charlottesville, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"I taught you to fight and to fly, what more could there be?" - J.M Barrie

Thank you so so much Ellie!  That means a lot to me :)

on Mar. 9 2014 at 1:41 pm
411Ellie PLATINUM, Fridley, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Paper is more patient than people." –Anne Frank

*came   hehe

on Mar. 9 2014 at 1:40 pm
411Ellie PLATINUM, Fridley, Minnesota
41 articles 28 photos 235 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Paper is more patient than people." –Anne Frank

I love poems that compare aspects of nature to everyday objects! This poem is ingenious! Phenomenal word choice (I had to look some words up :) and fantastic imagery. This is a very original poem. As I read it, my senses come alive! 5/5!   

on Mar. 9 2014 at 1:20 pm
Paradisaically BRONZE, Charlottesville, Virginia
3 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I taught you to fight and to fly, what more could there be?" - J.M Barrie

Thank you so much!!

on Mar. 9 2014 at 1:19 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

This is beautiful. I am not sure what Roseate is so I must go look it up. Great imagery.