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Dead...

April 1, 2014
By PhoenixTears GOLD, Stansbury Park, Utah
PhoenixTears GOLD, Stansbury Park, Utah
11 articles 6 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life sucks. And then you die." ~Jacob (Twilight)


Dead,
Dead,
Dead.

Who defines this term to me?
I may be dead, but I'm alive,
for I am living just to breathe.
Where am I, oh, I don't know,
Am I somewhere in between?
I breathe, I move, and I think,
Yet no life you'll find in me.

Alive,
Alive,
Alive.

What defines this complex thing?
Is it movement, is it action?
For this makes no sense to me.
Is it chemical reactions
controlling my whole being?
It is arguably so, yet...

To be alive is to strive,
and to strive is to care.
I'm indifferent towards the world,
And yet they will stare...

At the girl who is dead,
with a heart that's beating on.



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on May. 6 2014 at 12:17 pm
PhoenixTears GOLD, Stansbury Park, Utah
11 articles 6 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life sucks. And then you die." ~Jacob (Twilight)

Thanks for reading!

on May. 6 2014 at 12:16 pm
PhoenixTears GOLD, Stansbury Park, Utah
11 articles 6 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life sucks. And then you die." ~Jacob (Twilight)

Thank you so much! it means a lot to me!!

on May. 5 2014 at 10:12 pm
JJ_Lone PLATINUM, Davenport, Washington
27 articles 0 photos 73 comments
Love it. Its so complex that you have to read it a lot to understand it.  

on Apr. 27 2014 at 6:02 am
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 437 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

This is perfect! THe tone, the wording, the spacing, everything! And the last lines just put it all together! Great work! I have so much to say for this poem! (P.s. iveadded it to my favorites!)